Review Detail of LiquidCallous in Star Wars A Galaxy Reborn

I have spent way too much time on this app, yet I would be hard pressed to find something in more desperate need of help. It is a good idea, but the grammer, diction, punctuation, and immersion breaking crap made the execution worse than most on this platform. Furthermore, another glaring problem is that the mc gets everything he could possibly need at the beginning. No hard work is required from the mc to progress. The only two reasons this isn't rated a fat zero is for one that isn't possible and two the world is Star Wars, which automatically makes it a 5 star in that category.