Review Detail of seraphione in For_gotten

I like the way the author writes in a way that pulls you in emotionally. You will end up wanting to learn more about the characters and caring for them. The suspense and romance in this novel is aggressive, yet straightforward. It makes me want to know what will happen next and how the romance will progress between the leads. I think I’m more interested in the ML than the FL though. But the grammar and sentence structure need some work. Some sentences are as long as a paragraph and can be a bit repetitive. It isn’t to the point that it’s unreadable, so I think if the author uses a free grammar checker, they will be able to fix many of the grammar issues. Other than that, I enjoyed reading this novel so far and I look forward to how the story will progress from here!