Review Detail of LastGod in NOT HARRY POTTER AND THE SYSTEM

Wasted the first wish. Unfunny jokes like deadpool but deadpool's actually funny. So an unfunny deadpool. Then dropped the story. Really, if he kept it going Apollo would have dropped this anyways, it's really bad. It has promise if you got rid of the unfunny jokes took it seriously stopped making stupid decisions like having a character that is older than Harry loving his parents when he isn't really harry, and he knows he's not Harry. Even if you merged with Harry's memories, he should know that he's not harry. It's just annoying. That's the feeling I get for this story a lot. Is annoying that should not be the feeling you get from a story like this it should be fun, interesting.