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Devil023
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This story is totally messed up. Reason- 1. How can he reach intermediate level in 1to7 year magic just by reading within 10 days when he also does so many work. even if he have boost he can only learn things twice fast as normal/other genius. 2. How can he learn so much when his aunt family never let him learn or go anywhere. 3. How can anyone let 11 year old go Knockturn alley alone without someone attempting kidnapping him. 4. Runes. Latin lang and other major subject required so many books how can he learn when he didnt have Fast or instant comprehension. and where he can find so many books easily. 5. How can someone let 11 year old boy purchase occlumency book. and there are many many more points. 6. Whole story looks like chunni. AUTHOR DROP IT AND REWRITE

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NOT HARRY POTTER AND THE SYSTEM

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AncientRavioli
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Bro shut up. Fair enough to point out issues but why tf you saying ‘DROP IT AND REWRITE’ If the author enjoys the story they don’t need to change it. Just leave after your constructive criticism