the big issue with this story and the reason I stopped reading was pacing, so many authors here don't understand pacing. In this novel, the MC conquered 3 different girls on the first day, forcing feelings into them, this was so unrealistic that it became annoying. The MC has no difficulty at anything so the whole story becomes boring, the pacing is horrible and the characters become stupid for no good reason (there is a reason, just that is a reason that brings down the quality of the story). The concept was interesting but was completely killed by the plot
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