The backstory is amazing and I love what the author did with the afterlife but the rest isn’ t that good and the grammar is hard to follow and feels more like a Chinese novel that got translated
I apologize, I don't speak or write in English, I have to write in Portuguese so I can use the translator for English, maybe in the future, as soon as I learn the language, I intend to either rewrite the story, or just correct the mistakes, then I hope that give your feedback.