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Dragon_Slyer161
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If english is your first language, then you need to go back to middle school because i can barely understand what is happening in the story. I don’t really understand half the stuff that the mc does because they are unnecessary or just plain stupid. And you world background is all over the place, you have namwes from multiple animes and mangas with their powers having nothing to do with their powers in their original world, and you have a whole country watching a live streem of a kids birthday, as well as saying his family is considered the royal family of Camelot just because of their grades while having a family named Pendragon, which is the actual royal family of Camelot. so overall you character is an idiot, you writing is like a 5th grader, and your world makes aabolutely no sense.

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DDax
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bash someone when u get a brain idiot ... read the synopsis first i will never get you grammer freaks

Genesis_YT
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It literally says in the description that this novel is to practice his english

achearon
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for someone so finicky about grammar, you apparently cant read. oh the irony.

AncientRavioli
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