Review Detail of Majer3 in SCORCHING BLACK VULTURE

This following review has been published by Wise Entities Sect Academy (a writer community). https://wise-entities-padoga.webnode.page/sect-academia/ Okay hell yea sci fi for a change. Lets see.. Dark oh wonderful, romance eh?? Well maybe there is light after dark or so they claim. Nooot entirely sure about the super duper hero power stuff I really don’t want to see any failed Marvel money graph normal people superhero stuff ever again x,D but advanced technology is always nice. -Parents Strongly Cautioned makes me think maybe I should only review these/5 -Apocalypse, okay I hope it would have that existential thread of emotion that Fallout intros have about the condition of humanity. -Grammar mistakes/ if you are not native or even if you are use Grammarly premium google for cheaper code tho it drops the price from 144 to 115 dollars. Its only for the year tho, but if you write a lot and would need editing otherwise its for a year pretty decent deal and comes up with a lot of stuff that permit even me to pass text to public without too much of worry. -Hey have to give a author credit for honest contemplation of his gaming selection its nice to have these kind of reflections. People tend to use auxiliar chapters way too little. -After nice infodump prelude several chapters are almost purely dialogue with action packed stuff. Could it hurt the actions too much to write in between the changes of scenery, feelings, contemplations and such. When we think any complex solutions there has to be contemplation. Even genius has to weight their odds now and then. -Also the agency and feeling of what goals are a bit blurred by the lack of contemplation and thinking with dialogue heavy writing. But yea this is still relatively easy way to raise the level of writing from action scenario writing to action sci-fi writing.