Overall a very decent story. The writing quality is good. Maybe some small mistakes like missing a letter or something of that nature. It’s easily missed or overlooked. Stability of updates are kind of ok, but I would rather have quality so this is ok to have lower. Take your time to do it right. The story development is unique, I don’t want to give anything away so I can’t say to much. Maybe a little to much foreshadowing, which the author likes, and not sure how I feel about the direction with the formula. Characters are there, definitely not robotic and author is trying to make them all believable and different. Not many characters at this point in the story. The world building is at a good pace. The author describes and talks about different aspects of the world spaced out and with details. This helps significantly with readers understanding without the info dump feel. Good story but is not my style. Would recommend people try it.
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