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Review Detail of Chisenga_J in May Death Do Us Part

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Tragedy well hidden and masked by the premise of love- maybe hope. Not particularly anything novel (I'm sure love triangles are outplayed by now). Fair story progression it definitely holds one's attention provided the occasional grammatical errors and spellings don't put you off. Characters development feels tunnelled, supporting characters are eating bread crumbs. Not really an emotional rollercoaster but it does grind you enough to get a decent reaction in each chapter. It's practically chaos that attended a Catholic school- and that's interesting!

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May Death Do Us Part

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Thank you for the constructive feedback 🙏🏼😊 i real appreciate. They help me to be a better writter