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I don't recommend anyone to read this. Novel had great potential, interesting characters and world building, but the author absolutely butchered it. The MC keeps making mistakes and everytime the author takes from the ass some plot armor to save him. One example is the mc entering a temple and getting poisoned, the only reason he survives is because the floor magically collapses. And then you would think he would learn from his mistakes and be more careful the next time, BUT THE NEXT FUCKING CHAPTER he goes on another temple and gets ambushed AGAIN, and the only reason he doesn't die is again another plot armor. ( I've read till chapter 150 to see if this would continue and it does.) It really gets annoying, MC is hailed as a genius, but never learns from his mistakes, and keeps getting ambushed and saved by plot armor, every f-u-c-k-i-n-g time. He also conveniently forgets some of his itens that can save him from situations. If you don't mind a brain dead MC that doesn't seem to learn from his mistakes, plot armor that will always save him no matter what and conveniently forgotten itens from some chapters ago, then this will be a fun read. Very interesting characters and world building, got really curious about the world. I don't know if the author is gonna read this, since the novel is finished, but I really got hooked on the novel, like I said, characters and story wise, you did an amazing job. Just can't comprehend why you would write such brain dead mc that never learns. Anyways, nothing personal, really liked the novel, I pity I had to drop because of this issues.

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