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Review Detail of AuthorSven in White Online

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AuthorSven
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I love the story, world background, writing quality, story development but the only problem for me is character design I mean the mc is not the main problem but the enemies of mc I mean the one who attempted to kill her? I mean her past friend. I know the reason but let's just say the mc character is the one thing I hate because he just wanted to do it in her own just by punching? I mean sorry for the spoiler now that he know he can revenge just by waiting why don't he just hired a holdaper kidnap the boy and kill her in her own hands hays I know it pretty unrealistic to some others or even author but for me it was right to do because it's better to kill a potential threat before it can grew I mean the virtual is reality because of the gods made it to ? idk and so that.

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Zombiedread
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The main characters a guy?????