Review Detail of RuudMM in White Online
Review detail
Read about 40 chapters and had to stop reading (for now) . Very interesting world and the story seems to also become more interesting . So why did I stop? Well unless you like to read how pretty much every side characters (I guess at least once every chapter) are stunned and/or amazed by how the MC is a guy instead of a girl, how he has such soft skin, and how it makes women envious and men jealous, then this will get on your nerves. The characters designs are often also a bit boring. Instead of describing a character based on unique features (like a crooked nose), you get to hear why someone is beautiful or average. In other words telling instead of showing. It is also hard to gauge the intelligence of this MC. Sometimes he sounds smart, like using a rock throwing game in his favour. Other times he sounds like a idiot, like when he dismisses a skill allowing him to shoot through walls without considering any other uses for it like being able to penetrate armor or shields. If you can read past those kind of descriptions every chapter then I would definitely recommend this. The game is fun, the world is great, and the class is one I don’t think is used often. Props to the author for writing an interesting novel, I just need a break from all the trap and beauty descriptions.
White Online
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I am over chaptor 300, the author does not comment on how pretty he is as much now. also the status shown is less often. I don't want to spoil anything but there are more annoying things the author has done. I am torn between continuing reading hoping it gets better or just tossing it. I enjoyed the novel for a bit but the author has ruined the mc for me almost completely.
I have gotten to 391, how far are you? Did you continue or did you stop? Honestly this story can be so infuriating. The only thing that kept me reading was the Marksmen class ans Simu, however the MC has no remarkable skill. White death is a legacy skill so it doesnt count. Besides that he just has icy shot, illusion shot (now wraith shot), and marksman of space (poor mans Shunpo/instantaneous movement) i think its called. The skill arent thah interesting and are lackluster compared to king Klaus abilities. Also the fact the Author just mentioned the three new abilities at level 50 but then never mentioned there descriptions was so annoying. I few chapters later the MC suddenly has the movement tachnique, which tires him out after one use. And we never get to see what the other two could do. Both of which sounded better than Marksman of Space in my opinion.
Viduus:I am over chaptor 300, the author does not comment on how pretty he is as much now. also the status shown is less often. I don't want to spoil anything but there are more annoying things the author has done. I am torn between continuing reading hoping it gets better or just tossing it. I enjoyed the novel for a bit but the author has ruined the mc for me almost completely.