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Review Detail of VALANTINX in White Online

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VALANTINX
VALANTINXLv22yrVALANTINX

*sigh* So, I'll do a quick summary on why I wouldn't recommend you to read this. 1. All the characters in this story including the MC have D grade personalities, they're all so incredibly banal and cliche, I actually thought I was reading a terribly written generic self fulfilling isekai. 2. Dispite having above average writing quality in terms of vividness, non of the dialogue in this story is normal, it's so wacky, cringy; it's unbelievably sad that the author thought that what most of these characters are saying 20% of the time is realistic, this applies to both verbal and non verbal communication. 3. Oh boy, is this a terribly written power fantasy, the author gave the MC so much plot armour that he's almost invincible at the start of the story. 4. Most antagonists in this novel are absolutely brain-dead (Even gods) no matter the situation, the MC is the only person with a functional brain in this story. It's so sad that the author "stray maned" all the antagonists to make our MC seem strong, which only affirms that everything he achieved is undeserving. 5. MC didn't have to 'fight' for anything, he didn't have to 'struggle' I'm not saying that this is important, but if even a fucking god can't "beat" the MC at the beginning of the story, then why tf should I expect him to lose?

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Sephyre
SephyreLv3Sephyre

I saw you read up to like chapter 3 lol.

arekuruutento
arekuruutentoLv4arekuruutento

ikr, like man's preaching like he read more than a 100 chps

Sephyre:I saw you read up to like chapter 3 lol.