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Thanatio
ThanatioLv132yrThanatio

The story is well written and enjoyable to read. The only things I don't really like are the blatant foreshadowing, but it seems to have gone away in the more recent chapters. I also don't really like reading the female character descriptions, as there is a large focus on their curves and breasts. There seems to be quite a big plot that will show its head sooner or later, but I can already tell the main basis of it through the not so skillful use of foreshadowing. The main background of the story is, while not completely original, a refreshing twist on the usual VR stories. Overall a good read, I am excited to see where the story goes.

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Alekzi
AlekziAuthorAlekzi

My description skills sucks

Thanatio
ThanatioLv13Thanatio

can't get better without practice

Alekzi:My description skills sucks
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