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uhh, i guess it becomes 3 stars huh? the writing quality was kinda messed up, author should edit it to make the distinction clear. well the author already said when he will be updating new chaps. the story development... well, surface knowledge about the OG and it focuses mainly on the relationship and has a light hearted and slice of life feel to it. the character design.. well it slightly deviated to the norm, the MC wished to forgot some memories before reincarnating and straight to teen, its still in the early chaps so still not clear on the personality, but he kinda feels like glenn radars'if you know him'. the world Background. hmm its like a nerfed version of the OG to make it convenient for the Protagonist. it kind of border line Wish fullfillment and desire to make something original. the concept is good but needs improvement and character personality ...well to be seen. the relationship development is a little bit on the rushed side. overall its not bad BUT needs improvement.
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your not wrong it's going to be bad because this is like something I made myself with no editor or anything like that some ff made me want to make my own I know some people do this for work and all but for me it's something for myself and update whenever I want I make chapter whenever I want and have ideas all write like type out talk between characters that's not even going to show up until like 100+ chapter or maybe under 100+ chapter depending on how I want to write the story.
The_forgotten_ones:your not wrong it's going to be bad because this is like something I made myself with no editor or anything like that some ff made me want to make my own I know some people do this for work and all but for me it's something for myself and update whenever I want I make chapter whenever I want and have ideas all write like type out talk between characters that's not even going to show up until like 100+ chapter or maybe under 100+ chapter depending on how I want to write the story.