Review Detail of Mr_NonBeliever in The Extra's Survival
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Hello Mr. Author. I love your novel very much. Although the grammar is average. I don't mind. The character development and design are very good. But the jokes are quite cringed, it's like they are forced to make jokes. But I don't mind, I am here to enjoy the novel, not to justify. The overall world-building is quite good but I believe it could be much better. The storyline and plot are enjoyable. But there are a few slow points. I believe you will grow much better. I believe that there is no such thing as a perfect novel in this world. There would always be a thing or two which are dissatisfied with readers. And please, please Lord Author. I beg you not to make this novel a harem. I and my friends have to use our weekly pocket money to buy new chapters. I believe the harem will destroy the potential of this novel. And sorry if I have said any dissatisfied things in the comment that you may not like but I also have the right to give an honest review as I am sending my money on your novel. The novel has great potential. Please don't destroy it by adding a harem. I believe Lucus and the princess could very good couple and mainly I love the interaction between the two. Please don't add any third party. That's it, my honest review. Many might not like my comment but as I am spending money I have the right to express my honest feelings about the novel. Thank you, Your faithful and loyal reader.
The Extra's Survival
Mohitkumar
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Mohitkumar:Thanks for giving a sincere review. All the cons that you have said are true I am still a newbie who thinks of himself more as a reader than an author. About harem. You have already seen the one fl. Recently I have been thinking to add another Fl and make it two and that's the end. There will be only two fl and there won't be more. But I am still thinking about it and soon going to ask for opinions. It's not set in stone. Moreover, if I add another Fl will be much later. That's why I would also like to express your opinion... Would be like if I had another one or just left.Please give your sincerest suggestion
Thanks for giving a sincere review. All the cons that you have said are true I am still a newbie who thinks of himself more as a reader than an author. About harem. You have already seen the one fl. Recently I have been thinking to add another Fl and make it two and that's the end. There will be only two fl and there won't be more. But I am still thinking about it and soon going to ask for opinions. It's not set in stone. Moreover, if I add another Fl will be much later. That's why I would also like to express your opinion... Would be like if I had another one or just left.Please give your sincerest suggestion
Mohitkumar:Thanks for giving a sincere review. All the cons that you have said are true I am still a newbie who thinks of himself more as a reader than an author. About harem. You have already seen the one fl. Recently I have been thinking to add another Fl and make it two and that's the end. There will be only two fl and there won't be more. But I am still thinking about it and soon going to ask for opinions. It's not set in stone. Moreover, if I add another Fl will be much later. That's why I would also like to express your opinion... Would be like if I had another one or just left.Please give your sincerest suggestion
Author Love your novel. U really have a good story planned out. Pls pls pls pls pls do not make this a Harem.1 FL is enough. Harem just ruins the romance. Pls The Princess in Enough For Lucas.
Mohitkumar:Thanks for giving a sincere review. All the cons that you have said are true I am still a newbie who thinks of himself more as a reader than an author. About harem. You have already seen the one fl. Recently I have been thinking to add another Fl and make it two and that's the end. There will be only two fl and there won't be more. But I am still thinking about it and soon going to ask for opinions. It's not set in stone. Moreover, if I add another Fl will be much later. That's why I would also like to express your opinion... Would be like if I had another one or just left.Please give your sincerest suggestion
Hello, Mr. Author! Thank you for your reply. I was very excited to see your reply. It was kind of unreal, you know. Mr. Author, do what you need to do to make this novel satisfying, good and great. You have asked for my suggestion. Since I hate Harem, my judgment would be bent. Having one FL is enough for a novel. But if you want to add another, I can't say anything. Having another extra FL would create problems, such as LOVE STRUGGLE to get MC's attention. I would always prefer a one-sided and Sweet Romance. If you add another FL, you have to focus on two different things at the same time to keep the story's pace flowing smoothly, which would be extra hard work. You might end up stressing the novel. And there is a slight chance that it may ruin the potential of the novel. In my opinion, Harem just ruins a good Romance. It is quite painful to read harem novels where girls or wives fight among themselves to get MC's attention. Simple and sweet romance is the best. In my opinion, Princess is more than enough for Lucus. Two FL is a harem. Mr. Author, please don't add another FL to the novel. Keep Princess for Lucus. I love them both, I can't imagine another one between them. You can keep this novel HAREM-FREE. And I have already read you're other novel which is a harem. Even though I hate harem, but, since you are one of my favorite authors, I read. That's it, my honest review. I apologize if I hurt you with my words but I like to speak with a heart of honesty. Thank you very much for creating a world. Your faithful and loyal reader.
Mohitkumar:Thanks for giving a sincere review. All the cons that you have said are true I am still a newbie who thinks of himself more as a reader than an author. About harem. You have already seen the one fl. Recently I have been thinking to add another Fl and make it two and that's the end. There will be only two fl and there won't be more. But I am still thinking about it and soon going to ask for opinions. It's not set in stone. Moreover, if I add another Fl will be much later. That's why I would also like to express your opinion... Would be like if I had another one or just left.Please give your sincerest suggestion
Hello, Mr. Author! Thank you for your reply. I was very excited to see your reply. It was kind of unreal, you know. Mr. Author, do what you need to do to make this novel satisfying, good and great. You have asked for my suggestion. Since I hate Harem, my judgment would be bent. Having one FL is enough for a novel. But if you want to add another, I can't say anything. Having another extra FL would create problems, such as LOVE STRUGGLE to get MC's attention. I would always prefer a one-sided and Sweet Romance. If you add another FL, you have to focus on two different things at the same time to keep the story's pace flowing smoothly, which would be extra hard work. You might end up stressing the novel. And there is a slight chance that it may ruin the potential of the novel. In my opinion, Harem just ruins a good Romance. It is quite painful to read harem novels where girls or wives fight among themselves to get MC's attention. Simple and sweet romance is the best. In my opinion, Princess is more than enough for Lucus. Two FL is a harem. Mr. Author, please don't add another FL to the novel. Keep Princess for Lucus. I love them both, I can't imagine another one between them. You can keep this novel HAREM-FREE. And I have already read you're other novel which is a harem. Even though I hate harem, but, since you are one of my favorite authors, I read. That's it, my honest review. I apologize if I hurt you with my words but I like to speak with a heart of honesty. Thank you very much for creating a world. Your faithful and loyal reader.
Mohitkumar:Thanks for giving a sincere review. All the cons that you have said are true I am still a newbie who thinks of himself more as a reader than an author. About harem. You have already seen the one fl. Recently I have been thinking to add another Fl and make it two and that's the end. There will be only two fl and there won't be more. But I am still thinking about it and soon going to ask for opinions. It's not set in stone. Moreover, if I add another Fl will be much later. That's why I would also like to express your opinion... Would be like if I had another one or just left.Please give your sincerest suggestion
Mohitkumar:Thanks for giving a sincere review. All the cons that you have said are true I am still a newbie who thinks of himself more as a reader than an author. About harem. You have already seen the one fl. Recently I have been thinking to add another Fl and make it two and that's the end. There will be only two fl and there won't be more. But I am still thinking about it and soon going to ask for opinions. It's not set in stone. Moreover, if I add another Fl will be much later. That's why I would also like to express your opinion... Would be like if I had another one or just left.Please give your sincerest suggestion
Well, idk if you have read "the demon prince goes to the academy", but thats a perfect example on how to create a really good harem novel. I would personaly really like another Fl on the future as long as it is well developt, but in the end is up to you, author-sama
Mohitkumar:Thanks for giving a sincere review. All the cons that you have said are true I am still a newbie who thinks of himself more as a reader than an author. About harem. You have already seen the one fl. Recently I have been thinking to add another Fl and make it two and that's the end. There will be only two fl and there won't be more. But I am still thinking about it and soon going to ask for opinions. It's not set in stone. Moreover, if I add another Fl will be much later. That's why I would also like to express your opinion... Would be like if I had another one or just left.Please give your sincerest suggestion