Review Detail of DaStram in The Extra's Survival
Review detail
What a cheap copy of THE AUTHOR'S POV. Though not exactly the same but almost the same. There is no flow in the story, the writing is messed up, although I liked reading it, something about this story doesn't allow me to give it 5 stars or 4 stars.
The Extra's Survival
Mohitkumar
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I agree with you about the story being messed up and there is no flow. I know better than anyone that my writing is very bad and getting 1 star is right. But what you said cheap copy of author Pov. You are saying as if I just copy-paste the author's POV whereas the character and world-building are different. Now about the author's POV even it was a copy of TNE and it began very poorly but the author improved greatly. I just wanted to ask before giving the review have read it till the latest chapter. In the first 20 chapters Mc hadn't even started doing anything so how can you just read a few chapters. You have given author of the author POV enough time to improve but you are doing partiality against me because I am just a nobody. Is it fair. Aren't you being too harsh. I am not trying to offend you, I just wanted to tell you my novel may be cheap but that doesn't mean you can say it is a copy
well, like how you counter his horrible accusations for the book. He sure is a bootlicker and insincere person if he is going to judge a work this way. So, don't mind these people. You have already take the book this far, it would be better to see it till the end.
Mohitkumar:I agree with you about the story being messed up and there is no flow. I know better than anyone that my writing is very bad and getting 1 star is right. But what you said cheap copy of author Pov. You are saying as if I just copy-paste the author's POV whereas the character and world-building are different. Now about the author's POV even it was a copy of TNE and it began very poorly but the author improved greatly. I just wanted to ask before giving the review have read it till the latest chapter. In the first 20 chapters Mc hadn't even started doing anything so how can you just read a few chapters. You have given author of the author POV enough time to improve but you are doing partiality against me because I am just a nobody. Is it fair. Aren't you being too harsh. I am not trying to offend you, I just wanted to tell you my novel may be cheap but that doesn't mean you can say it is a copy
Chopping_board:well, like how you counter his horrible accusations for the book. He sure is a bootlicker and insincere person if he is going to judge a work this way. So, don't mind these people. You have already take the book this far, it would be better to see it till the end.
