Review Detail of Robert_Thompson97 in Marvel; My wife is Hela; Goddess of Death, Just Saiyan

I know this is a fanfiction but this is not how Hela acts. Also it jumps around too much and we are barely given any informatiom about the characters and the interactions are surface level so we dont know anything about our characters and then Hela breaks out gets beaten and is now going on dates the next day enjoyimg college human life? Yeah dropped