Review Detail of ManOfCulture69420 in Journey to the Peak of the Universe

The early chapters are a bit whack and character interactions are kinda awkward but it gets exponentially better as you read further. There aren't any major grammatical errors except some misspellings here and there but they can be ignored. As I've said the early chapters have awkward character interactions so the hàrém members are added in a bit of a rushed way. What I'll say is author is bad with pacing cause cultivation novels usually span a lot of chapters so while I'm grateful to author for not stretching the arcs but in my opinion arcs which may be important for bonding with other characters could be extended a bit more. I hope you'll make his girls also have their own arcs so they don't feel like they're just a collectible or some chapters from their pov. The smüt is also pretty good, I still don't know enough about MC's personality to talk about it here cause he's still going through character development so we'll see. All in all pretty great novel definitely above average on this site. 8.5/10 it's good but I'd suggest author should rewrite early chapters in his free time cause they give Jap mc vibes and it might turn away some people lol. Keep up the great work man👍🏽