Review Detail of Sleeping_Owl_00 in (Danmachi)To you who have my heart
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I don't have any professional advice to give but I would like to ask a question, this story's title is 'to you who have my heart' now in the auxiliary chapter you said that there will be harem now it sounds contradictory. I mean I kind of understand that how you might portray the mc. But it really reeks of hypocrisy how protagonist loved his wife only and after going to another world he forgets her and gets a harem. BTW, I don't know what will the future direction of story will take place but let's say you that mc became strong and got back to his original world to get to his wife now then the harem will be the problem and if you don't go that route and mc gets harem and is not able to go to his original world then what meaning will the story's title hold?
(Danmachi)To you who have my heart
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first thanks for reading my story. now the questions: -the title not only indicates love but also the fact that I can completely trust a person, who could be his wife, friend, teacher ... Basically trusting a person means that you are entrusting him with your life (heart = life) -his wife will also be reincarnated, but in a different way which will be explained in the next chapter -the reason he'll love another woman... hehe read and you'll find out
Further down the lane will you make this story a multiverse of will you stick to the world of danmachi?
Nales_Tales:first thanks for reading my story. now the questions: -the title not only indicates love but also the fact that I can completely trust a person, who could be his wife, friend, teacher ... Basically trusting a person means that you are entrusting him with your life (heart = life) -his wife will also be reincarnated, but in a different way which will be explained in the next chapter -the reason he'll love another woman... hehe read and you'll find out
Sleeping_Owl_00:Further down the lane will you make this story a multiverse of will you stick to the world of danmachi?
Nales_Tales:first thanks for reading my story. now the questions: -the title not only indicates love but also the fact that I can completely trust a person, who could be his wife, friend, teacher ... Basically trusting a person means that you are entrusting him with your life (heart = life) -his wife will also be reincarnated, but in a different way which will be explained in the next chapter -the reason he'll love another woman... hehe read and you'll find out
little spoiler, if you haven't read the beginning of volume two. The wife's soul is divided into three parts, two are reincarnated, while the third is reduced to fragments and scattered around the world. the problem of reincarnations, being fragments, will not have memories of the previous life, for this reason I said that he will love 'another' woman
Pythia:is his wife gonna love another man then by that bewildering logic??
right so is she or not though? i kinda don't want to read a story of a guy trying to back to his wife only to find her getting railed by another guy when he makes it back
Nales_Tales:little spoiler, if you haven't read the beginning of volume two. The wife's soul is divided into three parts, two are reincarnated, while the third is reduced to fragments and scattered around the world. the problem of reincarnations, being fragments, will not have memories of the previous life, for this reason I said that he will love 'another' woman
if this is your doubt, don't worry, it won't be like cultivation novels, where a young master tries to steal the protagonist's girl.
Pythia:right so is she or not though? i kinda don't want to read a story of a guy trying to back to his wife only to find her getting railed by another guy when he makes it back
Nales_Tales:if this is your doubt, don't worry, it won't be like cultivation novels, where a young master tries to steal the protagonist's girl.
Pythia:Ah good sorry its just ive been traumatised by some fics on here
Pythia:Ah good sorry its just ive been traumatised by some fics on here
Is this similar to that manga that I read about the Queen and her Knight. Where they both reincarnate 1000 years into the future but when the Knight looked for his Queen, she was split into six fragments which were the 6 princesses of 6 various race Kingdoms?
Nales_Tales:little spoiler, if you haven't read the beginning of volume two. The wife's soul is divided into three parts, two are reincarnated, while the third is reduced to fragments and scattered around the world. the problem of reincarnations, being fragments, will not have memories of the previous life, for this reason I said that he will love 'another' woman
shambe:Is this similar to that manga that I read about the Queen and her Knight. Where they both reincarnate 1000 years into the future but when the Knight looked for his Queen, she was split into six fragments which were the 6 princesses of 6 various race Kingdoms?