Review Detail of The_archer1202 in My Reincarnation as a Chicken
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utterly confusing story filled with random plot threads, the story starts with him being a slave only to not be within no time and for his bond to be removed, but then later he talks as if he only just lost the bond? there also seems to be chapters missing like the best friend part 1 having no counterpart so it just leads into a story on two characters who we've never met as far as i can tell only to then go back to MC as he is in the middle of evolving
My Reincarnation as a Chicken
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I apologise for the confusion. The plot threads are still ongoing, the bond was never broken and I apologise if it wasn't obvious in that chapter. The chapters with supposedly missing counterparts are completed several chapters later and though the titles may be confusing/misleading, I intentionally made them that way for a reason. Yes, I was introducing two new crucial characters for later on in the story early on as a breakaway from the MC's story, using their evolution as a sort of checkpoint. I apologise if you find any of these frustrating, but my writing is slow paced and lots of things will be answered / make sense down the line. Thanks for giving it a shot though!