Review Detail of j_hopefull in The National Goddess Reborn

Ok, have read until chapter 148. One word for this story to date: MESSY! Positives are: Updates regularly. Translations seems ok with a few errors here and there. Superpower. And that is it? Negatives: MC is supposed to be the usual "cool" or "outwardly cold" persona that many other MC's are in other novels but it seems to fail achieving that. The MC feels like a mix of many other MC's that we may have read but it all feels superficial? The story development and it's flow is HORRENDOUS! It is absolutely messy with incorrect time frames (one moment it speaks of certain amount of time and then it is a different amount time in the next few chapters that things have been happening). I can't even tell how long she's been reborn since the months written keeps changing from 2 months and later a character mentions something about half a year or something! The author also seems to jump from one action to another without any TRANSITION. It's like the MC was doing something one moment and then it jumps to something else. It makes it feel that there are things missing in between. The plot writing have quite a few redundant words as well. I can only assume this is a brand new author (kuddos & good luck to you if so) that needs to go back to the beginning of her story and restructure her story by fixing the time frame so that the story can FLOW. As it is, reading it can be confusing when a paragraph in a chapter should come AFTER another and vice versa. Also, is the author trying to make the MC some kind of female fatale? If so, it fails. It feels too abrupt having those males all be interested in her with the very limited interaction or vibes that is written. This novel has shown the MC to be very "violent" in an annoying way when I assume the author was trying for cold and bad*ss. Unfortunately, she's just violent? I don't mind if an MC beats their opponent but this MC just lack something? So bottom line, the IDEA of the story seems interesting but it is too messy to be enjoyable. Need a lot of fixing on time flow, fix up the MC a bit to make her more "alive" and then this novel would be on a better path. I will not read it any further or recommend until it is improved.