Review Detail of OukisLips in Naruto: The teacher system
Review detail
It's called "The Teacher System," but the MC doesn't really teach. He just wins gacha cards from the system and then uses them on his disciples. Not to mention that unless the student is a prodigy he just gives up on them completely. How is that "teaching?" If they're prodigies they don't need much teaching in the first place, and even if they did, just buffing them using the system is not teaching. And there's no original plot. So far the entire story is the MC's "students" tagging along with the main canon cast. The only difference is that the MC is grooming Sakura like a pedo. Other than that nothing's changed. If you're looking for a teacher in Naruto world then you'll be disappointed because the MC doesn't actually teach anybody. And if you're looking for an OC in Naruto world to shake up canon then you'll be disappointed because the MC goes out of his way to ensure canon stays intact. So there's no point in reading this story unless you've got so much free time that you're determined to read every single Naruto fanfic on this app
Naruto: The teacher system
Rysangel
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Paradise_Palace:Bro if you don't wanna read. Stop reading. It's a story. Maybe the author does want the mc to have that behaviour. Who knows
idiot why does the author post's story online because they want others to read and when he read it and gave a review some idiot like you come and be like 'don't read it if you don't like.
Paradise_Palace:Bro if you don't wanna read. Stop reading. It's a story. Maybe the author does want the mc to have that behaviour. Who knows
Paradise_Palace:Bro if you don't wanna read. Stop reading. It's a story. Maybe the author does want the mc to have that behaviour. Who knows
Paradise_Palace:Bro if you don't wanna read. Stop reading. It's a story. Maybe the author does want the mc to have that behaviour. Who knows
Paradise_Palace:Bro if you don't wanna read. Stop reading. It's a story. Maybe the author does want the mc to have that behaviour. Who knows
GabrielRott:Everyone is free to express their opinions. And honestly, I agree with the man.
Rysangel:Thank you so much for your criticism, I'll try to learn as much as I could from your comment ^_^.
He is teaching and he is also a good teacher to many students (you would have known if you continued reading the novel) This is a great novel and it does not deserve your rating or critics since they are not true. That's a fact everyone who have read this novel will see. Author has done a great job with characters, plot and the grammar 👍👍👍
? I read all of the chapters that were available at the time of the review (around ch.25). My review is completely true based on the available chapters at the time, as evidenced by the fact that the author himself commented on this review and didn't dispute anything I stated
Harris_Kirik:He is teaching and he is also a good teacher to many students (you would have known if you continued reading the novel) This is a great novel and it does not deserve your rating or critics since they are not true. That's a fact everyone who have read this novel will see. Author has done a great job with characters, plot and the grammar 👍👍👍
Novel without the protagonist finding love, I don't know, I feel like there's always something missing... It's no use being the strongest shinobi in the world, famous, without happiness, burdens to share. PS: Your novel é amanzing!
Rysangel:Thank you so much for your criticism, I'll try to learn as much as I could from your comment ^_^.
Harris_Kirik:He is teaching and he is also a good teacher to many students (you would have known if you continued reading the novel) This is a great novel and it does not deserve your rating or critics since they are not true. That's a fact everyone who have read this novel will see. Author has done a great job with characters, plot and the grammar 👍👍👍