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You can't please them all but the story is right up my alley. Why is my rating low though? Well that's because the ending is severely disappointing. In a word, RUSHED. It felt like the author didn't want to continue anymore and just abruptly wrote something that he thought was a good enough wrap up. Well in case it isn't obvious enough with my tone, it's not. There is a huge hole in the story. We don't even know what happened to that Venerable Lie Kong from another county or what his purpose was for implicating the Su family effectively rendering chapters 144-147 absolutely useless. It wasn't even touched upon once in the succeeding chapters all the way to the end. It would've been fine if the MC decided to kill the 3 old guys or the author made something up on a somewhat believable reason why he would spare them. It's a freaking major reason for his wife's family's suffering for crying out loud. Now it just feels like he didn't care enough to get to the bottom of it.

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