Review Detail of luhluh19 in I Become Invincible By Signing In

exactly ! same! just think about it, did he need to go to a cleaning job with his grandmaster relam strength ??? even a kid wouldn't go there ! but he went there and meet camp supporter.... and then gave him his Cultivation Technique which was given by system like nothing ! although he want to repay him and his father but there are many ways in the world to do....and then all of a sudden it's about disciple making thing....srsly it's been mostly 1 or 2 week since he came to this world .... and instead of going and clearing things with his ex-wife he is sitting here and trying to control things ....... first i thought mc is quite , working on individual things and then we would unravel the world but he kinda get tired and sat there while PPL are coming to him telling what happened ....like his Auntie once .... truly disappointing .... what we need: consistency of updates and chapters less grammar mistakes less cliche little bit logic .. jade beauties understanding if not smart MC ( includes character development phase without clichés) and Lastly a good powr system and cheat system! and that's it....just these things needed