Review Detail of The_Gilly in ,,,-

So I really liked the story. However, I think that having a story that starts has the normal building of a relationships that eventually leads to lemon has the issue of running into the story becoming bland and dry. Now don’t get me wrong I enjoy lemon most like most readers on this platform however, as I have read more and more fanfics I have seen this issue occur many of times. Overall I think the story is well written and that the characters develop well over the length however I think the use of lemon was overdone and lead to less character development.