Writing quality is amazing and though he will never correct anything he generally won't have to. Story Development is okay. Certain things I question (Ashly being one of them.) While others are quite well done (Emma and sky.) Character design. Lemme just say. Ashly makes me want to have her grow some balls so I can put them under a hydraulic press. Everyone else is well done. Although mc can feel a little bland sometimes. The actual designs are cool such as water hair in the newer chps. Updates come pretty fast. This might be my last post here if I can't keep up. World is still in need of building. But it feels a little bland and mundane. Nothing super new here. Overall a good novel. World building is a bit weak but the characters are compelling. **** Ashly though.
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