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Yoshitaka_Fukuda
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It’s a pretty decent novel. However as the story progresses plot holes start appearing. The biggest one being the MC has a “panel” system and should be leveling up the fastest which he does. Then out of nowhere everyone else magically catches up to his level instantly. He spends 50+ years training in a time difference space. But his girlfriend spends 1 year and jumps above his level. Speaking of his girlfriend. She would be the second reason this story isn’t as great. It’s starting to focus on her and their love and veering away from the “world traveling” storyline. If those factors above were addressed in a better way, it would be more enjoyable. In the end it’s still worth a read at this point in time.

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Shuttling Between the Two Worlds

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Yoshitaka_Fukuda
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I tried to read it. It was very well written. The problem was it was way too slow paced for my style.

Pendulum_:Please give mine a try Name: Reincarnation of the Cross
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Please give mine a try Name: Reincarnation of the Cross

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No problem, thanks still

Yoshitaka_Fukuda:I tried to read it. It was very well written. The problem was it was way too slow paced for my style.