Review Detail of Le_Krackeen in Youth World

The story is pretty good and the writting at the first person is really well done. Sometimes it seems really surreal though, as they're just children. For exemple, they are all following orders without asking anything; they make weapons and train themselves, but it's seems rushed as I ask myself why do they need to do that. So for me, the characters are not enough "alive". But the developement is good, and I like gestion of armies, well done for that. Keep up the good work !