Review Detail of Kitshaar in The Heart Of Dominance (OLD)

The start is dynamic and attractive, while usually, the norm is to write in the past tense author had chosen to use present but it's not a bad thing per se. Character design is unique and genuine in my opinion. there is no information dumping and the story flows appropriately which is good. Updates are stable enough that readers don't have to wait. the only flaw I found in the narration is that it is tough to read conversations because there is no gap between them and it leads to confusion about who is saying what and which part is said and which part is not. I think it can be corrected easily so it's not a big issue. good luck for the author.