Review Detail of AzureConqueror in Lord Of The People: I Recruited A Mutant Succubus From The Start

This is something I had hope for. It had a lot of potential but due to several reasons I decided to stop at chapter 94. Anyone who has first read Warlock of the Magus World then read The Wizard World should understand how I feel about this novel. After all I've already read the better version so I at least hoped this would have some good points. Unfortunately there are too many flaws (like The Wizard World). I won't go into too many details so first of all the main problem is the author. He creates the mc's troops but for certain periods he ignores the ability to increase tier and all the advantages he gives mc the mc doesn't take advantage of (like being able to skip tier 7). He also doesn't show when the succubus troops level up and tier up unless he randomly decides to mention it (once in a blue moon). Like what's the point of troop novels if we don't know most of the troops, don't understand their abilities and how it compares to others, don't know the names of most of the important troops etc. Too many things not done perfectly. At the start Elise tiered up twice in a row so I figured out the author only does it when he thinks the mc is too weak, later I confirmed it with how new troops are only added based on the situation like how 2 Lightning fallen succubus were suddenly summoned together and it never happened again until I dropped this. There's also the sudden references to China thrown in out of nowhere like the array and the 5 elemental teleportation. The mc doesn't want to attack others unprovoked, but the author has no problem making a whole Alliance decide to destroy his territory to loot him. The way Tina's ability works was really annoying. If he wanted do something do it, if not then why being it into the novel? Really a lot of minor things plus some spoilers I read and decided to drop this. But like I said most of the issues were solved perfectly in the other novel which I assume was inspired by this one. The name of the other novel is The Castle of All People: The Only Random Army Angel at the Beginning of the Game