Review Detail of SperenSilverblade in Lord Of The People: I Recruited A Mutant Succubus From The Start

Usually I don't like kingdom building stories not that much, because they lack sometimes the action. But this story is a little bit different, the balance between action and kingdom building is the correct amount for me [img=recommend] The main problem with this story is the poor writing quality. I read over 300 chapters and there is still a big problem with the gender of the various characters. The main character switched between "he" and "she" very often in the same chapter. Further the naming of the characters is not consistent, e. g. "Elise" is also named "Illis" or "Ylise". @Author-San: Please review the chapters and fix the errors, it makes reading more pleasurable.