Review Detail of Prince_nonchalant in I'm gone... deleted

The story feels like a smooth read. It's direct and fortunately not confusing. It gets to the point and delivers. Synopsis: Great synopsis, though a little lengthy. It feels more like a prologue than a description of what the book is about but that's fine. Writing Quality: Great all round. Nothing to criticize here. Vocabulary, grammar, punctuations, etc, are all on point. This is what makes the book feel so smooth to read. I only saw one part where a single comma was missing but that's nothing to pick at. Story Development: The premise is nice and it's quite captivating. It doesn't feel boring and the pacing is just right. The character's personalities are quite interesting to observe when they interact with one another. Great job here. Character Design: Marked the author real hard here. Though it's a preference for describing how characters look, for a romance book, I always believe that the characters should be described. It makes it more interesting and allows the reader to actually visualize the characters better, as well as gain a better understanding of a few things the love interests like about one another. Overall: There wasn't much to criticize. The book feels relaxing to read and it can certainly do well. I wish the author all the best! Keep at it and this book can make it to the top!!