Review Detail of tunefullcobra in HYBRID IN TEEN WOLF (ON HOLD)

this fic is quite good, the author understands the original media and the Mc who seems to be the only OC is well created an her personality is well portrayed. unfortunately this book suffers from three main flaws, though if you can ignore them it's an amazing book. 1. the author keeps forgetting to put "I" into sentences for example they'll start a sentence with "am going to..." where the character was saying that they were going to. it's bad enough that it almost seems purposeful. 2. the author writes as if the reader has already watched teen Wolf (the show this is based on). as someone who hasn't watched that I can confirm this makes things a lot harder to understand, not impossible, just harder. 3. the explanations and descriptions are shortened to "character x tells character y all the details about z" when the reader was never given much details about "z" leaving me scratching my head. there were some very good opportunities to give details about the characters by how they describe things or maybe they had fun on date for example because they won some obscure plushy and it was their favorite. just the little things that most people take for granted that can really flesh out a story and give the characters lives of their own