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Now I would advise you guys who still haven't started reading this novel to read this review. The actual review is in the comments section of this because I can't post a very long detailed review for some reason in WN. As in, it just always say error so it is what it is, I'm the one who would adjust! With that said, kindly read it there~
Date a Live: Inverse Spirit of Paradox
Wryyyyyyyy
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Uhm, did you read any source materials? Like the novel? I mean, reading this fic should at least require some fundamental knowledge of DAL. Otherwise, you would be going blind reading this for there are some terms that are only associated in DAL.
Jhon_Ariel_Castro:Question, will I be able to understand your/the story even though I haven't watch the anime? đ
Now then, I advise for those who still haven't read my FF to read this review first. Okay, treat this guys as a Q&A corner. Ask things that you want to know and I will respond to it with the best answers I could muster. Let's go with the Cons of this Novel. These are the things I first want to point out. 1) If you don't like a slow progressing and an irregular chapter updating story, then think first before reading this. I mean, I don't want to step on someone's nerves or something. 2) If you don't like the MC with contradicting behaviors and thoughts which would be spotted from time to time then I advise you to stop it here. This novel would undoubtedly give you guys a headache and a load of confusion at some parts. 3) If you guys prefer an MC who just collects girls left and right just like some wild Pokemons out there, then this novel would probably be not your preference. I plan to conceptualize a proper background as for why the MC would be with them and vice versa. And I will remind you guys, this is a HAREM FF, so the MC would undoubtedly have a number of girls with him, but not each and every one of them.
4) If you don't like the MC being nerfed (his abilities) slightly at the start, then stop right here. I don't want to aggravate more readers than necessary just like before because of this issue. Some say he is weak as f but I will tell ya, he isn't, he could be already considered OP already just by his abilities, I only plan to have him show control on his powers as the story progresses. Just a little patience would be great guys. I would appreciate it.
5) The main character development would be somewhat slow. I hope you guys would have some patience for that as well. 6) The chapters I make are considerably long (2k-3.5k words are long in my opinion), and at some point of the chaps, it would be boring to read. So if you like some packed and engaging story with long chaps then I advise you to stop it here since it would only be a waste of time. 7) This novel is by so far be described as AVERAGE or above average at best. For those who are expecting some grandiose fanfic then I'm sorry for this wouldn't be your cup of tea. But still, I encourage you guys to read this humble work of mine if you are interested.
Now that I'm done with the downsides or Cons, let's get with the Pros or things that might attract you. 1) An OP MC which would develop alongside the story progression. A reasonable one and not some BS. 2) Girls of the MC would have enough screentime and effect on the story along the way unlike other fanfics who just forgets the girls when they are collected or something 3) Above average or long length chapters (2k+ words as always) 4) Minor characters or mainly other heroines who are not given that much attention in the novel would have some decent spotlight in this novel. If you like this kind of thing then, I would gladly have you guys reading this novel. 5) Diversion from the original would be apparently (obviously), but there are inevitable parts which would remain (obviously). Well, nothing much about this... 6) Kurumi and Tohka (Tenka as well heh), are the best waifus in the DAL franchise! This is a thing that would get you interested right..? UmU, it is what it is! 7) On to the last part, I'm fine with criticisms backed up with reasonable things so don't hesitate to ask or comment your thoughts about this novel. I'm quite open for suggestions and regards like that. Phew... Quite exhausted splitting this review with no copy oaste... With that said, adios~
Question: Will there be often lemon scenes, occasional lemons, just mentioned but never gone into detail, implied but never directly stated or will there be not even implied situations⌠this is a rather important point. I for instance would dislike a harem story without occasional lemons but would only like them occasionally(atleast 20 chapters apart unless itâs integral to a budding relationship)
Wryyyyyyyy:Now that I'm done with the downsides or Cons, let's get with the Pros or things that might attract you. 1) An OP MC which would develop alongside the story progression. A reasonable one and not some BS. 2) Girls of the MC would have enough screentime and effect on the story along the way unlike other fanfics who just forgets the girls when they are collected or something 3) Above average or long length chapters (2k+ words as always) 4) Minor characters or mainly other heroines who are not given that much attention in the novel would have some decent spotlight in this novel. If you like this kind of thing then, I would gladly have you guys reading this novel. 5) Diversion from the original would be apparently (obviously), but there are inevitable parts which would remain (obviously). Well, nothing much about this... 6) Kurumi and Tohka (Tenka as well heh), are the best waifus in the DAL franchise! This is a thing that would get you interested right..? UmU, it is what it is! 7) On to the last part, I'm fine with criticisms backed up with reasonable things so don't hesitate to ask or comment your thoughts about this novel. I'm quite open for suggestions and regards like that. Phew... Quite exhausted splitting this review with no copy oaste... With that said, adios~
The lemons will happen, though only after a progress in character development and time spent between Rei and the girls. As you said, this will only happen occasionally but it will only show I think in the later parts, not yet for now. PS: I already made a response to this question of yours a while ago, but it seems that it can't be seen or sent for some reason.
AlphonseDarkshield:Question: Will there be often lemon scenes, occasional lemons, just mentioned but never gone into detail, implied but never directly stated or will there be not even implied situations⌠this is a rather important point. I for instance would dislike a harem story without occasional lemons but would only like them occasionally(atleast 20 chapters apart unless itâs integral to a budding relationship)
Wryyyyyyyy:The lemons will happen, though only after a progress in character development and time spent between Rei and the girls. As you said, this will only happen occasionally but it will only show I think in the later parts, not yet for now. PS: I already made a response to this question of yours a while ago, but it seems that it can't be seen or sent for some reason.
Question, In the story have you mentioned the world briefly? I mean although I have seen 2 seasons of DAL, I haven't seen any further, so? Will I still be able to understand what's going on? Because a lot of things are unknown to me after all.
Wryyyyyyyy:Now that I'm done with the downsides or Cons, let's get with the Pros or things that might attract you. 1) An OP MC which would develop alongside the story progression. A reasonable one and not some BS. 2) Girls of the MC would have enough screentime and effect on the story along the way unlike other fanfics who just forgets the girls when they are collected or something 3) Above average or long length chapters (2k+ words as always) 4) Minor characters or mainly other heroines who are not given that much attention in the novel would have some decent spotlight in this novel. If you like this kind of thing then, I would gladly have you guys reading this novel. 5) Diversion from the original would be apparently (obviously), but there are inevitable parts which would remain (obviously). Well, nothing much about this... 6) Kurumi and Tohka (Tenka as well heh), are the best waifus in the DAL franchise! This is a thing that would get you interested right..? UmU, it is what it is! 7) On to the last part, I'm fine with criticisms backed up with reasonable things so don't hesitate to ask or comment your thoughts about this novel. I'm quite open for suggestions and regards like that. Phew... Quite exhausted splitting this review with no copy oaste... With that said, adios~
Oh yeah. I've already been using a lot of info in the light novels which is very way way ahead of the anime. That's why maybe you are confused or don't know much as of what is happening sometimes
DrAGOn:Question, In the story have you mentioned the world briefly? I mean although I have seen 2 seasons of DAL, I haven't seen any further, so? Will I still be able to understand what's going on? Because a lot of things are unknown to me after all.
Sadly, you may not understand everything. Precisely because I am using information far ahead from season 2. This fanfic contains spoilers ahead season 4 after all. However, if ya still have the patience to read and understand what's going on, then thanks for your time. Hope this answers your question
DrAGOn:Question, In the story have you mentioned the world briefly? I mean although I have seen 2 seasons of DAL, I haven't seen any further, so? Will I still be able to understand what's going on? Because a lot of things are unknown to me after all.
Wryyyyyyyy:Oh yeah. I've already been using a lot of info in the light novels which is very way way ahead of the anime. That's why maybe you are confused or don't know much as of what is happening sometimes
Just tidbits about the whole setting. As for now, it's a bit messy since this is mixed with some factors coming from FGO. But if you remove the FGO factors, the world is pretty much the same as the OG one
DrAGOn:Another thing, do you explain the world well?
I think I do it well. More like, average but at least it is readable. It varies on the reader as for how they view how I write, some say it's good and some says it's bad. In the end, it just depends on how you (readers) view it in your own 3yes
DrAGOn:Another thing, do you explain the world well?
Wryyyyyyyy:Now then, I advise for those who still haven't read my FF to read this review first. Okay, treat this guys as a Q&A corner. Ask things that you want to know and I will respond to it with the best answers I could muster. Let's go with the Cons of this Novel. These are the things I first want to point out. 1) If you don't like a slow progressing and an irregular chapter updating story, then think first before reading this. I mean, I don't want to step on someone's nerves or something. 2) If you don't like the MC with contradicting behaviors and thoughts which would be spotted from time to time then I advise you to stop it here. This novel would undoubtedly give you guys a headache and a load of confusion at some parts. 3) If you guys prefer an MC who just collects girls left and right just like some wild Pokemons out there, then this novel would probably be not your preference. I plan to conceptualize a proper background as for why the MC would be with them and vice versa. And I will remind you guys, this is a HAREM FF, so the MC would undoubtedly have a number of girls with him, but not each and every one of them.
Wryyyyyyyy:The lemons will happen, though only after a progress in character development and time spent between Rei and the girls. As you said, this will only happen occasionally but it will only show I think in the later parts, not yet for now. PS: I already made a response to this question of yours a while ago, but it seems that it can't be seen or sent for some reason.