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Monsieur_Anon
Monsieur_AnonLv32yrMonsieur_Anon

Good writing quality as of late. Except for the fact that you often post chapters with broken or uncompleted sentences. Need to fix that. Story Development is going steady so far. Not the best, but still in good standards. Character design... not the best but still bearable. Nothing much really changed and I hope you may work on that next. Updating Stability, 5 chapters a week is decent specially the chapters you are posting is ranging up on 2.5 to 3k words. World background is interesting yet confusing at the same time. I hope you create more chapters which some give depth to this matter since some things are just very confusing at this point. Overall, this novel is still good in my opinion. Though it clearly needs some improvements and adjustments specially on the MC, I can still conclude that this FF is a good read.

Date a Live: Inverse Spirit of Paradox

Wryyyyyyyy

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