Review Detail of Aizen_81 in Date a Live: Inverse Spirit of Paradox
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The idea, the events, everything is good, the problem with the way you narrate the events is boring. I go down a lot and do not read most of the speech because it is boring and I do not feel any progress in words, and even the fights are boring, so whoever has long patience should read it, but whoever is upset about useless dialogues, I do not advise
Date a Live: Inverse Spirit of Paradox
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First of all, thanks for the review! I understand that some of the dialogues and parts of several chaps(almost everything I guess) may have been unnecessary long. Well, I noticed that it would be some kind of problem for readers that like to read straight to the point so yeah ... sorry for that. Well another reason for the long dialogues and context is that I really base and write some details in the original work... which somehow affected the writing style in the process. Can't do much anything about it until I noticed it just recently tho... Also, about the fighting scenes... erm. You could say I'm just not to experienced writing things like that at the moment haha. Well, I try my best tho to flesh out details from it as well as to try making it entertaining... All in all, I appreciate you pointing out some flaws here, I'll try my best to improve my work. With that said once again, Thanks for the review.
