Review Detail of Lazyboi in Date a Live: Inverse Spirit of Paradox
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This fic definitely has potential so i will give you my full support author-san. I myself am a harem lover so i hope to see some good romance in this fic and please for the love of every holy beings in existence don't make the mc capture girls like pokemon! I don't care if you put 1000 girls in the harem just give some development in their relationship first.
Date a Live: Inverse Spirit of Paradox
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I'll try my best to meet your expectations Honestly, I am not so sure about making a "very good" harem novel since this is the first time I am writing a novel like this and in terms of writing experience, I can say that my novels are right below average to average standards I guess Still, thanks for the review and I hope this novel will be worth you time~
Everything have a start you know? I think you could use this fic to further enhance your writing skill by trying new things. Honestly, a good harem for me is to see the bonds created between characters and how strong they could become throughout the story. Also one of the essential part of a good harem i think is the growth of the mc in the story, of how he could become someone better than his past self. He didn't have a chance to experience any good things in his previous life, so i would love to see his journey as a person in the Date a live world.
Wryyyyyyyy:I'll try my best to meet your expectations Honestly, I am not so sure about making a "very good" harem novel since this is the first time I am writing a novel like this and in terms of writing experience, I can say that my novels are right below average to average standards I guess Still, thanks for the review and I hope this novel will be worth you time~image
Lazyboi:Everything have a start you know? I think you could use this fic to further enhance your writing skill by trying new things. Honestly, a good harem for me is to see the bonds created between characters and how strong they could become throughout the story. Also one of the essential part of a good harem i think is the growth of the mc in the story, of how he could become someone better than his past self. He didn't have a chance to experience any good things in his previous life, so i would love to see his journey as a person in the Date a live world.