Review Detail of ThugB in That Time I Got Reincarnated As A Slime In Naruto World

Item: That Time I Got Reincarnated As A Slime In Naruto World
Rating: 3.2

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ThugBLv11yrThugB

Too much 4th wall breaking 'thoughts' and A/N comments - can't go a single chapter with immersion. Still good writing, but it's not my cup of tea. Solid 3-stars!

That Time I Got Reincarnated As A Slime In Naruto World

Joao132135

Liked it!

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Joao132135AuthorJoao132135

in due time, this will be rewritten and I'll remove author notes from it, if people don't get it, their problem If you want to be here when the rewrite starts, just bookmark the fic, thanks for the review and unfortunately, some 4th wall jokes will probably stay

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