Review Detail of Iron_Man_3000 in Starting as a Jumper on Marvel Multiverse

-The updates are good considering you have it set to a countdown…. -The story is kinda good -But the worst is the Chinese elements that don’t translate well into English Americans do not act like this at all…. It’s confusing and frustrating… We don’t call an old man a Respected Elder -You get what I’m implying -The story idea is great -You need to get an English born editor that’s fluent in Chinese or your native language to translate it and fix it into an American or English grammatical way of speaking. -Thanks for the Story