Review Detail of Anime_Asim in Konoha:Opening Sign In to Rinnegan {Naruto Fanfiction}

I have a request. This overall fanfiction isn't bad, if its tweaked a bit with more clearer english, it will be a fun to read fanfic. Am I allowed to edit these chapters into a more clearer and gramatical english. Another bit, could I then post the edited fanfic. You will be credited but yh. If you don't like it, I don't mind, its just that this fanfic could get more love if it wasn't just machine translated