This is a novel with a decent premise and engaging plot but it has some glaring issues that have made me decide to drop it. 1. The characters speech is soo unnatural and feels very forced. They make random statements that don't really need to be said and are very out of place. 2. There is too much story with nothing actually going on. You'd think I'd be used to that from reading wuxias but it is especially bad in this one. the first 250+ chapters span like 2 weeks, maybe, in the story world. Just can't do it anymore.
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