I enjoyed this one a lot. I think there is a nice balance between action and interaction. I've read a bunch of stories like this and this one stands out as better at describing the situation of the character in a way that makes the circumstances and the stakes more relatable. I wish the writer would write more of this story. I think he should continue to write he's got some talent.
ArchMage
Liked it!
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