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I will now be posting on Monday Wednesday and Friday I am not being lazy I am writing everyday but I don’ want to stress to much on chapters and provide the best I can thanks for all the support in the form of cries even tho I doubt ya are real but if you are [click here to make sure ur not a robot: power stones]:

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Man?Monster?God?.

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Nana1960:I think my English is pretty good, at least good enough to work in a an English speaking country. It is just that the way you write in English is weird. The sentences don't flow, neither does the logic etc. It is pretty hard to follow. It may just need an editor for smoother transitions.
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Is there a harem?

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No their is not I despise them

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There

LORDOFORIGANALink:No their is not I despise them
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I literally have done that so u haven’t read far

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Nana1960
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Ok. My bad when I stopped reading there wasn't any other chapter but I see on the next one he met the healer. In the end I gave up on the story, the English is making it hard for me to understand what is going on. The story seems interesting but I get confused too much reading it. I stopped at the first arena battle when he asked the old lady to go get stuff for saving her grandson. Good luck author.

LORDOFORIGINALINK:I literally have done that so u haven’t read far
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I see that your English isn’t good but it’s fine my novel isn’t for everyone

Nana1960:Ok. My bad when I stopped reading there wasn't any other chapter but I see on the next one he met the healer. In the end I gave up on the story, the English is making it hard for me to understand what is going on. The story seems interesting but I get confused too much reading it. I stopped at the first arena battle when he asked the old lady to go get stuff for saving her grandson. Good luck author.
Nana1960
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I think my English is pretty good, at least good enough to work in a an English speaking country. It is just that the way you write in English is weird. The sentences don't flow, neither does the logic etc. It is pretty hard to follow. It may just need an editor for smoother transitions.

LORDOFORIGINALINK:I see that your English isn’t good but it’s fine my novel isn’t for everyone
ILovemyself_84
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Romance?

LORDOFORIGANALink:No their is not I despise them
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Romance?

LORDOFORIGANALink:No their is not I despise them