Review Detail of Thalia_Ilace in Demon hunters - the beginnings

So this actually isn't an accurate rating since you only have one chapter I can't give you stars on stability of updates - which brought the rating down a lot. Now into the actual review. I really enjoyed this a lot and I want to continue with the story. Your writing quality is pretty good, although there were a few mistakes here and there. I feel like this was a pretty solid first chapter although I do wish there was just a sprinkle more of the main plot. I think you could have expanded upon your character design a little bit more but I think it was good for the first chapter. I'd like to see you go into more detail in the future. As of now I have a pretty okay idea of the characters in my head. My biggest complaint is the world background and time-frame. I didn't get a feel for the world at all other than a beautiful house and even then I wasn't sure if he was referring to his house or a random one he was passing by. As for the time frame, I was really confused. You mention that he recently moved and that the route he took to school was foreign to him and today was his first day of school. However, you also make it clear that he's well known in his school, already has a solid friend group and mentioned that he's been at the school at least since the second day of secondary school. So, did he just move to a different house in the neighborhood? I think that would be the biggest regret for this first chapter which I don't think says much since it was still a very enjoyable read despite that. Good work!