Review Detail of Xx_Chump99_xX in World Of Warcraft: FanFic The Heavenly Star
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The story has a good premise if you excuse they translation errors such as saying Therazane is a dude and such. However my biggest gripe with it is that the MC is so focused on revenge when he didn't even get betrayed. Like when the MC "gets his revenge" I literally have no idea what he is getting revenge for. It literally is just him betraying his teammates in the middle of a war and causes them to lose. Then after all of MC's preparations and actions, tries to "stick to canon" by doing nothing for like 1 million years. You've got good ideas, but are executing them poorly. Better than the majority of stuff on Webnovel, but still frustrating to see wasted potential.
World Of Warcraft: FanFic The Heavenly Star
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Adam_Clinton:Really? Is it that they really didn't do anything at all or that he's overreacting? What happened to make him want revenge?
Chump99 said he thought the mc was focussed on getting revenge when there was nothing worth getting revenge for. I want to know what someone did to the mc to make him want revenge, so I can come to my own conclusions about whether pursuing revenge is justified or not.
Audio_Coon:I don't quite understand what you want to know. If you explain me I can answer you ^^
It all depends on how you really see it. partly because I'm a novice at this and I didn't know how to express what I wanted to transmit. The mc seeks revenge because he is being made a fool of practically. They alter his plans and his moods are much faster and more directed towards violence. It is practically because of his violent mood that his feelings of revenge occur.
Adam_Clinton:Chump99 said he thought the mc was focussed on getting revenge when there was nothing worth getting revenge for. I want to know what someone did to the mc to make him want revenge, so I can come to my own conclusions about whether pursuing revenge is justified or not.
...So he has no real reason for revenge other than mood swings and everyone not following his word as gospel?
Audio_Coon:It all depends on how you really see it. partly because I'm a novice at this and I didn't know how to express what I wanted to transmit. The mc seeks revenge because he is being made a fool of practically. They alter his plans and his moods are much faster and more directed towards violence. It is practically because of his violent mood that his feelings of revenge occur.
Yes, from what read he is just being a jerk and he already have a reason to betray them yet he is seeking revenge for nothing. He need a solid reason for revenge to be fuel by anger. Author could have done better( I know he is new). btw he is also a huge simp lol. Not just normal huge simp, he is a super simp which I find it funny. I am at ch 46 rn. To author pls don't make him lose his mind in front of his love interests and just do a normal and slow love life without much fast drama for the love plot.
Grafian:...So he has no real reason for revenge other than mood swings and everyone not following his word as gospel?