Review Detail of Son_of_the_Sun_God in The Adventurous Gamer Ninja - Daichi Hekima.

Really liked this story at the start. Everything was great but as soon as your Mc turned off gamers mind I feel like ur story’s quality nose dived. It’s pity as well bc you had such a good foundation to work with and such good grammar, dialogue, and oc characters like Ren. Your mc was great as well, making decisions properly while staying calm but still having emotions toward his grandpa. He also previously didn’t feel the obsessive need to entertain all the canon little kids like naruto and the rookie nine like 90% percent of Webnovel authors feel like they need to do for some reason. He did his own thing but that changed when the gamer mind went off or at least in my eyes it did. Anyway i think im gonna stop here. Ik this is ur story so im not gonna tell u to change ur story bc I think ur mc suddenly became horrible but im still disappointed bc I was looking foward to proper naruto fanfic mc with the gamer . I wish you luck on ur story author