Review Detail of PartyCannonPirate in M no Monogatari
Review detail
I tried to read it and just trying to get through the first two paragraphs hurt my brain none of this seems like proper English repeating of words, phrases that make no sense. I like the idea and the premise that it's supposed to give off but I can't read this without my brain hurting and it making no sense to me .
M no Monogatari
Shin0bu
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I appreciate your review, I really expected this, as you said, my English is not the best, my language is another one and I used a translator to translate it to English. So I don't expect a good translation either, but it's not only that, but my way of telling it, even I'm a little embarrassed because I was a newbie when I started. Anyway, have a nice day and thank you.
no problem the idea of your story and the general context you were gone with I honestly was looking forward to it it's just I was having a hard time reading it but keep at it hope you'll find a translator that is better
Shin0bu:I appreciate your review, I really expected this, as you said, my English is not the best, my language is another one and I used a translator to translate it to English. So I don't expect a good translation either, but it's not only that, but my way of telling it, even I'm a little embarrassed because I was a newbie when I started. Anyway, have a nice day and thank you.
How about you try grammarly, it'll greatly help you in correcting most of the grammatical mistakes in your novel. It's a good one, it just need some polishing in grammar and how you portray the characters and the story itself.
Shin0bu:I appreciate your review, I really expected this, as you said, my English is not the best, my language is another one and I used a translator to translate it to English. So I don't expect a good translation either, but it's not only that, but my way of telling it, even I'm a little embarrassed because I was a newbie when I started. Anyway, have a nice day and thank you.
Dao_of_Nothingness:How about you try grammarly, it'll greatly help you in correcting most of the grammatical mistakes in your novel. It's a good one, it just need some polishing in grammar and how you portray the characters and the story itself.image
