Review Detail of Hansel_Mieres in Pokémon : An Unexpected Odyssey

So far the story is going well but I think it could improve if the personality of the protagonist improves a little and that insecurity is removed and he decides to be the best. In addition to the fact that I hope he catches good pokemon like dratini, electabuzz, rydhon, charmander and an abra, I don't know the best ones and evolves them. Not that it only captures low potential ones like ratata and if it can, it also catches legendary ones. Please take that into consideration.